Māmītu Lalû - Revision history

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 May has large, gently curving horns and long, straight, black hair that falls down to her hips. She often wears it partially or completely braided. She is short, but not slight, and her appearance and bearing both speak to her pampered life in Arthrennar. She has a round, pretty face with large, amber eyes.
-A patch of scars runs along the left side of her jawline and down her neck. Her tail has been mostly amputated, leaving only about a foot of its original length, a trait which affects her balance and gives her a slightly uneven gait. She tends to wear loose fitting garments like robes, often with high collars to better obfuscate her scars.
+A patch of scars runs along the left side of her jawline and down her neck. Her tail has been half amputated, leaving only about two feet of its original length, a trait which affects her balance and gives her a slightly uneven gait. She tends to wear loose fitting garments like robes, often with high collars to better obfuscate her scars.
 ==Background==
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 It was during this period that her dragon mark first manifested on the back of her right hand, taking the form of an arcane circle. At first she did not know what the mark could do, but after significant research and experimentation she found that it was a ritual which could bind objects to her if they had been marked with the same symbol. She could then recall such objects to hand instantly from wherever they were.
-Shortly before May turned 18, however, her comfortable life was disrupted. Saḫḫiru found some family records indicating that the Lalûs had once been granted stewardship of a small port town along the east coast called [[Nēšu Abamātu]], and as such May would technically be the acting Domina of the trade center upon her next birthday. Unfortunately, when he sent messengers to the town he was informed that it was being threatened by a group known as the Maazakai which were poised to cut off its trade and perhaps even raze the city itself.
+Shortly before May turned 18, however, her comfortable life was disrupted. Saḫḫiru found some family records indicating that the Lalûs had once been granted stewardship of a small port town along the east coast called [[Nēšu Abamātu]], and as such May would technically be the acting Domina of the trade center upon her next birthday. When he sent messengers to the town he was informed by the acting Dominus, a shadar kai named [[Laris Valerius Corvis]], that it was being threatened by a group known as the Maazakai. Laris suggested that now might be an opportune time for the missing Domina to make an appearance, preferably with reinforcements.
-When he brought the documents to May’s attention she wanted nothing to do with them. She wanted to study and she resented anything that took her away from her books and her comfortable life in Aethrennar. Her demonic counselor, however, hoping to re-establish the Lalû family as a force for his master, had other plans.
+When Sahhiru brought the situation to May’s attention she wanted nothing to do with it. She wanted to study and she resented anything that took her away from her books and her comfortable life in Aethrennar. Her demonic counselor, however, hoping to re-establish the Lalû family as a force for his master, had other plans.
-Saḫḫiru overruled May’s objections (while he still could) and sold off the family’s Aethrennar holdings to finance an army (consisting mostly of mercenaries and Turathi refugees) to travel with them to Nēšu Abamātu. Once there, Saḫḫiru made an uneasy alliance with the Hrieffen tribe to the south for mutual defense against the Maazakai, who attacked soon after the Turathi army became ensconced.
+Saḫḫiru overruled May’s objections (while he still could) and sold off the family’s Aethrennar holdings to finance an army (consisting mostly of mercenaries and Turathi refugees) to travel with them to Nēšu Abamātu. Once there, Saḫḫiru made an uneasy alliance with Laris and the Hrieffen tribe to the south for mutual defense against the Maazakai, who attacked soon after the Turathi army became ensconced.
 Though the combined armies turned back the Maazakai (Despite the treachery of part of the Hrieffen’s forces), the city was far from safe, and it now rested on May’s unwilling shoulders to see that it remained standing.

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 Though the combined armies turned back the Maazakai (Despite the treachery of part of the Hrieffen’s forces), the city was far from safe, and it now rested on May’s unwilling shoulders to see that it remained standing.
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+https://i.imgur.com/y5AgqfZ.jpg
 ==Dragonmark==
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 Though the combined armies turned back the Maazakai (Despite the treachery of part of the Hrieffen’s forces), the city was far from safe, and it now rested on May’s unwilling shoulders to see that it remained standing.
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 Though the combined armies turned back the Maazakai (Despite the treachery of part of the Hrieffen’s forces), the city was far from safe, and it now rested on May’s unwilling shoulders to see that it remained standing.
-[[https://i.imgur.com/y5AgqfZ.jpg|centre]]
+https://i.imgur.com/y5AgqfZ.jpg|centre
 ==Dragonmark==